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...is that the funny paris song i hear? sick stuff vurb

man i love making things in a short amount of time.... real nice stuff

this song is pretty great, although might i suggest adding some more quieter parts in this to let the listener relax? whether that may be a pause before the drop (or even in the drop for that element of surprise) or a slow breakdown part, it feels like this song is too "shoved up in my face" with all the constant loudness and it will really benefit by having it's quieter parts.

great stuff for 3 hours! :D

you know, when they called it liquid dnb, they didn't meant for you to put literal liquid in your song lol.

hell, you even went as far as drowning your sound in the literal liquid. respect. maybe if you could emphasize your drums and bass a whole lot more that would work wonders for this song. (or like tone down those bubbling effects a bit, same thing in the end?) your mix feels slightly empty too, you could try adding an 8-bit arp and some pads to play the chords during the drops of your song to fill some of that sound in. also you could probably try to cut the lower frequencies on those bubbles? i find those stereo-rized lower frequencies slightly grating to the ears...

you have a really interesting idea tho being serious about this, good job...

holy fucking shit this is something you don't see everyday on newgrounds

frontpage DESERVED

Metaljonus responds:

Thanks!

i knew this was going to get fucking frontpaged on sight

great job on this

in fact great job on the whole album holy shit that's a banger

i was walking in the rain
with my timbs on
stepping over puddles full of pain
its a big storm

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junipersona responds:

Yuh, yuh yuh

you've improved since the last time i've heard (and possibly reviewed as radicaldawg) your music.... it's really nice

gives me omori vibes? really effective loop you got there, great job

EDIT : ahhh two months ago.... that felt so long ngl

hmmmm is that a complex time signature i hear? the drums sound wonky and i'm wondering if you do utilize that. i really dig the drums.

anything besides that? i.... it could be better. for starters, your bass is too weak, and that really gives a big hole in your track. this track could also use an actual melody instead of relying on arpeggiations and a really slow piano that doesn't flow at all. instrumentation is also very generic. maybe that was your intention? (edit : it actually is lmaoo) to leave this empty just so musicians could be psyched to fill it in... i'm not sure but it feels like you could do more justice to this song if you want people to flip this

that being said, i still might flip this nonetheless hehe :3

it's that... vocaloid? the vocals used i mean

nice song btw

ahhh these types of songs, one can never go wrong with this. even if you're an amateur going on pure instinct that gives out more of the charm... i suggest you add some effects to bring the most out of this, fx like reeverb, delay, distortion, etc. all can make or break a song.

i hope you make more :3

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