the discombobulation of a man

...is that the funny paris song i hear? sick stuff vurb

man i love making things in a short amount of time.... real nice stuff

this song is pretty great, although might i suggest adding some more quieter parts in this to let the listener relax? whether that may be a pause before the drop (or even in the drop for that element of surprise) or a slow breakdown part, it feels like this song is too "shoved up in my face" with all the constant loudness and it will really benefit by having it's quieter parts.

great stuff for 3 hours! :D

you know, when they called it liquid dnb, they didn't meant for you to put literal liquid in your song lol.

hell, you even went as far as drowning your sound in the literal liquid. respect. maybe if you could emphasize your drums and bass a whole lot more that would work wonders for this song. (or like tone down those bubbling effects a bit, same thing in the end?) your mix feels slightly empty too, you could try adding an 8-bit arp and some pads to play the chords during the drops of your song to fill some of that sound in. also you could probably try to cut the lower frequencies on those bubbles? i find those stereo-rized lower frequencies slightly grating to the ears...

you have a really interesting idea tho being serious about this, good job...

a little note; there are a bunch of free art alternatives better than ms paint... paint.net and krita are what i use to do art. you can definitely do mouse art tho, but only pixel art would do as anti-aliasing is a bitch for mouse users. you just gotta' "git gud" ig

now this is something i rarely see in the frontpage!